Post details: It's got this one button that makes you forget............. : (
It's got this one button that makes you forget............. : (
Thursday, December 14, 2006
There is a girl. She's really young. About six. She is hiding under her father's desk. Her father is on his way back from work. She's so excited. She's just grinning so hard. It's going to be great. Her father is going to walk in and not expect anything, but she's going to jump out! She's clenching her teeth together, she's grinning so hard. She's so excited. Her mother squeezes her and smiles.
His car drives up the driveway. It's a good car. Her mother hears it and whispers that he's here. The girl can't control her excitement anymore. She pees herself.
The mother looks at her and smiles, but she's not looking back. She's too scared. She's actually just ruined the whole thing.
When her father opens the front door the mother is rushing into his office with a cloth. He's curious about what happened, but he's first going to go get a beer and sit down in the living room. His wife is always doing stuff like this. They love each other SO much. They are very considerate of each other. He turns on the television. It's on the entertainment channel. This is a channel that focuses on celebrities and their lives. It's okay.
I think this could be like the opening scene in my sitcom. The episode will reveal a lot of facts about the story like how the father just came back from the moon. It'll be great.
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User comments
Maxi
it's a tad heart breaking. i have tears in my eyes.
Posted by Maxi on Thursday, December 14, 2006 at 5:05 PM
The Ancient Shark Of Despair
See, that’s what I wanted to do. I really wanted to stress the innocence in all of the three characters' pain. That's how it is. You're all nice to people. Everything is good. But then reality comes back with a two-parter. The first part involves a confrontation where a smile doesn't make up for a voiced opinion. The second: a million million ideas that never existed all saying 'no' at the same time. You've been rejected by your own brain. Sorry.
Posted by The Ancient Shark Of Despair on Thursday, December 14, 2006 at 11:21 PM
